For school we had to rewrite Goldilocks and the Three Bears, making it a dialogue. Here is my version of it.
Papa Bear, Mama Bear and Baby Bear sat down to have porridge for breakfast. The porridge was too hot, so Mama Bear said “Let’s take a walk while our porridge cools down.” Papa and Baby Bear agreed.
While they were gone Goldilocks, who was wandering in the forest, found their cottage. She knocked on the door, and when there was no answer, she went inside. Inside, Goldilocks found three bowls of porridge. Goldilocks said “I am really hungry!” So she tried all three bowls. One was too hot, one was too cold and one was perfect. She ate the whole bowl of porridge! When she finished the porridge she saw three rocking chairs. She tried sitting on each one. One was too hard, one was too soft, but one was perfect. She rocked in that rocking chair until it suddenly broke! Goldilocks was so tired she decided to go to sleep in one of the three beds they had. Again, one was too soft, one was too hard and the third was perfect. ” I’ll take a nap in this one.” yawned Goldilocks.
When the bear family was back, they found the porridge disturbed and Baby Bear’s rocking chair broken! They went upstairs to find Goldilocks sound asleep in Baby Bear’s bed. Papa Bear woke her up saying “Why did you come into our home?” Goldilocks said sleepily “Oh! Oh I’m so sorry! I didn’t know it was your home! Please forgive me!” Baby Bear said “I forgive you.” After that they all became very good friends.
The End.